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David's New Adventure Ch7.

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David's Start of a New Adventure
Ch7. A Close Call

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Hey what's up you guys? TripleThreat here with Ch.7 ready to go. I just want to give a quick shout out and thanks to all the people who gave me comments and reviews so far. All of them were great, you guys are awesome! ^^

WARNING: This story contains strong language, yaoi, and some M-Rated/sex scenes in later chapters. If you're mature about it please read on; if not DON'T READ IT! You have been warned.

Disclaimer: I/TripleThreat do not own the rights to Pokemon; except for my OC.

Seventh Chapter, Enjoy XD

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David kept on running; hoping to find a Pokemon Center soon. He's also hoping that this Treecko will survive this severe trauma from its abusive trainer. David couldn't even imagine how abusive a trainer or trainers can be towards their Pokemon. But now that he saw it with his own two eyes, he felt fury and hatred towards on who would do such a thing to their Pokemon

'It's just not right.' He thought. To treat Pokemon the way this Treecko has been treated. This made David wonder if Pokemon are being abused all around the Pokemon world. There probably is and he can't do anything about it; much to his displeasure.

Now as David was running to find the Pokemon Center, he thought if he remembered correctly, all or most of the Pokemon Centers are usually a rather large building with a huge Pokeball against the front of the center.

'Pretty simple and straightforward to find.' He thought to himself.

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It didn't take long for David to find the Pokemon Center. But considering the fact that David had almost had to run all the way to the other side of Azalea Town, which made him very exhausted. But at least he made it to his destination before anything could get any worse, and that's all that mattered to him.

"Nurse Joy-Nurse Joy!" David yelled as he ran through the sliding automatic doors towards the counter where Nurse Joy is. Which she actually jumped up by surprise from the sudden outburst from 'someone' while she was doing some of her paper works.

"Yes-Yes?... Oh dear, what happen?" Nurse Joy said while she came to her senses that a teenage boy calling her name came running in the lobby with a beat up Treecko in his arms.

"I can explain later, but just get this Treecko some medical help now!" David exclaimed; sounding desperate as well has an alert expression on his face. Like who wouldn't? This Pokemon could die in his own hands at anytime at any minute!

"Right-Right, Chansey!" She called out through the hallway behind her, and within a second, 2 Chanseys each with a nurse's hat came running through the hall, went around the counter and gently took the Treecko out of David's arms and put the poor Pokemon on a stretcher. Then quickly roll the stretcher back to where they came from, but going through a medical door at the end of the hallway. "I suggest you wait at the waiting room please." She point towards David's left that there is a small waiting area at the left end of the lobby. After Nurse Joy said that sentence, she quickly followed the Chanseys into the medical room as the doors closed in behind her.

David had no other options but to wait. So he made his way to the waiting area and sat himself down and just... waited. As he was waiting patiently, he got a better focus on his surroundings as he previously did not paid attention, due to because of a dying Treecko in his arms and all. But as he looked around the lobby, it was actually empty.

Usually there would be trainers around doing something relating with their Pokemon. Like healing their Pokemon after Pokemon battles, or get their Pokemon a quick check up. Or just staying in for the night then be on their way the next day. But it's was like a ghost town in this lobby where David is waiting in right now. This somewhat made him wonder why there weren't any trainers in the Pokemon Center, but he quickly dismissed the thought and decided that if he was going to have to wait for hours he could at least get an hour or two of rest in him so he wouldn't get bored, or lose his sanity.

It was about 6 o'clock according to his Pokedex so it was starting to get late anyways and besides; running around almost over halfway through a town to find a Pokemon Center can be exhausting. So without a further or do, David crossed his arms across his chest as well as putting his head down as he closed his eyes and let the dreamless sleep consume him.

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It was nearly over 7 o'clock when someone suddenly gently shook David on the shoulders as he was actually having a good sleep, even though he was sleeping on a chair. (I don't know how people sleep on chairs; they seem so uncomfortable to sleep on! XD)

"Hmmm? What... what is it?" David said tiredly as well as he physically looked kind of groggily on his seat. He then looked at the intruder of his slumber and came to realize that it was Nurse Joy. He then jolt straight up on his seat as he was getting some mixed thoughts and concerns whether or not if Nurse Joy has some good news or some bad news for the Treecko he just rescued a few hours ago. "Nurse Joy! What happen to Treecko? Is it ok? Is it dead? How serious are the injuries? Is it-" He then got interrupted by Nurse Joy putting up one of her hand, indicating for him to stop talking, which he did. Because he probably sounded like a babbling idiot. So without humiliating himself further, he shut himself up and listen on what Nurse Joy had to say.

"Don't worry; Treecko is going to be alright. The good news is that there are just a bunch scrapes and bruises here and there. But about a few days without seriously doing anything physically, his minor injuries should be healed in no time at all. (Notice that you now know the gender of Treecko)" That made David feel a bunch of weight lifted off his shoulders; relieved that Treecko is not dead so he wouldn't have to worry about the gecko Pokemon so much. But unfortunately there's always the bad news after the good news, or vice versa. "But due to the lack of blood the Treecko lost, he won't be waking up until around the middle of the day, so he should rest. Also he has a minor concussion so he might feel a little bit dazed whenever he wakes up." Ok so David guest it wasn't as bad as he expected it would be, but better than having any serious injuries that will affect any short terms or long term problems, right?

"Okay so am I able to see Treecko?" David said in a calm voice.

"Yes of course; Treecko is resting down the hallway in room 4, and you can stay here as long as you need to." Nurse Joy said with a reassuring smile. So David got off from his seat and was about to head to Treecko's room when Nurse Joy place her hand on David's shoulders "David if it's not too personal, would you mind telling me what happen to your Treecko? I haven't seen such a beating on a Pokemon for quite some time." She asked curiously. David seemed unsure at first, but he knows he can trust Nurse Joy.

"Well actually, Treecko use to belong to another trainer, but now I guess Treecko is with me now." He said in a sad tone as he remembers the beating, the abusing, and the screaming that Treecko had been through. All of the memories made him tremble a little, but quickly stop knowing that Treecko won't be harmed anymore.

"Oh, so what happened?" She said as she was getting more interested.

"You may want to seat down for this; it's a pretty intense experience." David said as he leads Nurse Joy to the waiting area for both of them to sit themselves down.

When they both sat themselves comfortable, David took a deep breath and began.

"Alright, it all started when me and my Pokemon were coming out of the dock and we heard someone screaming in pain, so we went to the source and we..."

(Ok I'm not explaining the little abusing story again since you already know it and probably don't want to read/know it again, so we're just going to skip that part.)

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"...and here we are now." David concluding that little story of his.

"Oh my, that's so awful! What kind of a trainer would do such a thing to their Pokemon?" Nurse Joy said while crying and sniffling, and while taking out a handkerchief out of her pocket and dry a few of her tears and blow her nose in it.

"I don't know... all I know is that this is not the way trainers should treat their Pokemon and that we should treat them with respect and treat them as friends and equals." He said as Nurse Joy agrees with David's statement as she is still sniffling. "Are you going to be okay Nurse Joy?" He said with concern. He didn't mean to make Nurse Joy upset, that's why he was unsure to tell her what he saw and what Treecko experienced in the first place.

"Yes I'll be fine; you can go see Treecko now if you want." The nurse said, starting to be her perky self again and brought herself out of her seat and went over to the counter and starting to finish off her paper works that she was previously got interrupted from.

David was relieved for that Nurse Joy was not upset anymore. So with that said and done, David got up from his chair and made his way around the counter, into the hallway and open the door in room 4. Where he hope that Treecko won't look as bad as he previously looked when David last looked at the abused gecko Pokemon.
Okay that's the end of the seventh chapter, yes! XD

But to be honest; I don't think this was one of my best or lengthiest chapters I've written.

But either way, I think this chapter was an 'okay' chapter for my opinion. But I want to know from you, so please leave a comment or review.

Also, what do you think Treecko's condition going look like?

Find out in chapter 8 in, 'David's Start of a New Adventure!'

But for now, TripleThreat out!

Laters...

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nice that Treecko serviced, Now is his going to join David on his Adventures.